I was enjoying a peaceful ride on my horse with my friend Annie. Then all of a sudden dancing trees came dancing in the arena.
oh no what are we going to do.
They took a look at me, and they danced out of the arena then they came back dancing on horses. What are we going to do, I don’t know but we Beter think quick Annie said.
I know get that stick over there and we will spook the horses by throwing it. So, Annie did that the horses got a fright and they fell off and runway.
2 thoughts on “The Dancing And Riding Tree’s”
Hi Maddy
I liked your story; I liked the part where you said that they came back dancing on horses. Just a tip I think that next time use some punctuation when two different people talk that’s the only thing, I had to say but overall, you did great.
From Kayle
PS- I think Kayle was hoping to see quotation marks, I have also heard them called speech marks in some countries. Thanks, Mr. Cleaveley
Hello Maddy
In the sentence we better think fast you spelled it as beter and run away is ran away but the rest is awesome. I own horses so I love this story.
Hi Maddy
I liked your story; I liked the part where you said that they came back dancing on horses. Just a tip I think that next time use some punctuation when two different people talk that’s the only thing, I had to say but overall, you did great.
From Kayle
PS- I think Kayle was hoping to see quotation marks, I have also heard them called speech marks in some countries. Thanks, Mr. Cleaveley
Hello Maddy
In the sentence we better think fast you spelled it as beter and run away is ran away but the rest is awesome. I own horses so I love this story.
-jaya